"Zac, look, there's a lion!" (p.4)
Zac and Thomas, spoke by two people. Zac, look, there's a lion! said Thomas.
Zac looked to his right. A lion walked in front of the truck. Cool. It looks really big, said Zac.
Do you think they are hunting us? said Zac. No! said Abasi. They look really hungry. Suddenly, he and Zac were rocked to the floor. The truck stop them. What happened? said Thomas.
His father pointed at the engine. Steam was coming out of it.
They are waiting to start the engine again. It was getting late in the day. His father tried to start the engine again, but just would not go. They were afraid.
Peter.M. (2001) Jane.W.M.
(125words) all 4433
Zac and Thomas, spoke by two people. Zac, look, there's a lion! said Thomas.
Zac looked to his right. A lion walked in front of the truck. Cool. It looks really big, said Zac.
Do you think they are hunting us? said Zac. No! said Abasi. They look really hungry. Suddenly, he and Zac were rocked to the floor. The truck stop them. What happened? said Thomas.
His father pointed at the engine. Steam was coming out of it.
They are waiting to start the engine again. It was getting late in the day. His father tried to start the engine again, but just would not go. They were afraid.
Peter.M. (2001) Jane.W.M.
(125words) all 4433
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