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2010年5月26日水曜日

BR05:I wish



"I hate school" (p.4) I wish


This is story about Pele, Ron and Pete. They hate school. Pele said, he is tired of working so hard. Ron said, he is sick of being a slave. And Pete said, Dudes, school is like a bad smell.

They decided to go to Pacific Ocean. A weeklater, the three friends were sailing across the Pacfic Ocean. One day, the blue sky turned black. Their boats have overset. They are climbed onto the bottom of the boat. One day,Pele found very old, big, green bottle with a big cork in it. He opened the bottle. The boys kooled up and saw a giant genie standing over them. Ahter, he said What do you wish for?

Pele said, he wish he was back at school.

Ron said, he want the same as Pele.

But Pete's wish was not able to be heard.

Jack.G.(2007) Sue.D.

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BR04: The Jewellery Shop Robbery




"The red car" (p8) The Jewellery Shop Robbery





One day, Eddie was walking from the school to the house.
When the corner was visited, he saw a lot of people outside jewellery shop. He said to the woman who was standing next to him, What has happened? The jewellery shop was burgled. And, the burglar stole all jewels. This night, there was a parson who had seen the burglar run away taking a red car by news. Eddie said to his mum, When coming home from school, I saw a red car parked to the next outside a house not crowded.
Eddie went outside after the dinner. A red car was still parked there.
And, there was just a noise from somewhere in he back. He turned around and he saw the inside walking to the window. He was not able to believe what you had seen. Two men were sitting there.
He moved away from the window soon. He talked his mother, and his mother called police. And, the thief was arrested.

Carmel.R. (2007) Kate.A.

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BR03: Super Fit


"You're so lucky! he said." (p.6)




This story about Marcus and Sandy. One day, Sandy said to Marcus, "Coach Williams is making us do his Super Fit Training Program again tomorrow." But Sandy injured her finger. She is wait for her recover from injury. Next day, Coach Williams asked him, "Marcus, what happened to your hand?" He froze on the spot because his injury of finger is lie. And, "I have some good news for you," Coach Williams said. He said continuously so, "We're going to do some indoor rock climbing today." Marcus was shocked. To skip, he vomited the lie. But he had mistake. I think that the thing not running away from an unpleasant thing is important.



Peter.M. Super Fit. Mal C.

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TH07: My other classes

I like ' Current English' class. This class's teacher is Mrs. Yoneoka. I like her class, because I think her class is benefits for me. And her class is interesting but very difficult. In this class, we are chats with an English discussion and the quiz. I think that the discussion about English is difficult. It discusses it in English about current topics. We write the chat of current events. This class is a class that can learn current news.

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TH06: How I study English

I like to speak better than write English. I often go to exchange student's dormitory. I have exchange student's friend. This is first time for me. She teaches daily conversation in English to me. I studied a lot of English from her. I think that it is important to speak English. But it is hard to me. I take notes to remeber doing from her having gotten it.

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