BR11: Saying Goodbye

"I keep thinking that he's going to walk in here any time" (p.6)

Mum said I have to put on my best clothes. And, she said it is big day today, and need to look good for Grandpa. He likes golf. When he got older, he started playing golf. Sometimes, he would find a coin behind one of my ears. He loved behing in his garden. He liked to hear the radio when he worked. One day, I he went over to help Grandpa. But, it was so quiet. The radio was not on. He was very sad. He was never going to see Grandpa again.

Carmel. R. (2001) Cheryl. O.

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BR12: Buzz Takes Over

"I've done all the driving on this trip, Zip said to Buzz." (p.4)

This is story about Buzz and Zip. There are Alian. One day, I've done all the driving on this trip, Zip said to Buzz. It is your tuen now said Zip. Zip climbed into one of the sleeping pods and closed the door. He was traveling around space. Then, there was a black hole in front of him. He was very surprised. The ship zoomed forward and started to roll. He crashed onto the floor. However, he survived. He was sleeping with the ship. He opened his eyes and looked outside. He screamed. There was a pirate there. He ran away in a hurry with the ship. Then, there was moreover a black hole in front of him. After what seemed like a very long time, the ship stopped rolling.

Carmel.R (2001) Karen.Y


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BR09: SCAR

"BEWARE of DOG" (p.6)

This is story about boy named Nick. He likes skateboard. He was really brave. Anyone could tell you that. But He was not brave about. He was scared dogs. Sometimes, when he walked past the fence, he heard Scar digging. And he scratching. He walked a bit faster. He ran.
He didn't stop running until he reached the park. He was lost. He started to run again. Never run from dogs, he remembered. But he kept running. He was surprised to see the dog. Dog is very little.


Chris. B. (2001) Katie. M.

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BR10: The Inventors' Club

"She put on some basketball shoes" (p.8)





This ia story about Bianca, Chad, Ben and Jodie. One day, Bianca
put on some basketball shoes. Other people wtched her. She stood up when she had put on the shoes. She started running around the bedroom. She acted out what she was saying. Other people could not believe how high her leapt into the air.He stole her shoes. Ben grabbed shoes. He squeezed his feet into the basketball shoes. He leapt into the air. The other just laughed and laughed.


Nicolas. B.(2001) Phillip. S.


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BR07: THE GAME

"Brad was then sucked into the game."(p.9)


This is story about boy named Brad. He was asleep at his computer keyboard. Then, Brad, are you in the game? A long voice came through Brad's earphones. Brad is wake up. Slowly, Brad opened his eyes, and he looked at the computer screen. Michael was on the screen. Brad looked Michael.

Brad pushed the red button on the keyboard. And, he turn upside down and span in the air. He was sucked into the game then.

He looked around and saw that he was in the computer game.

Brad fight with Michael in the game. He quicky shut his computer.

Is it a dream?

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BR08: Lions!

"Zac, look, there's a lion!" (p.4)





Zac and Thomas, spoke by two people. Zac, look, there's a lion! said Thomas.

Zac looked to his right. A lion walked in front of the truck. Cool. It looks really big, said Zac.

Do you think they are hunting us? said Zac. No! said Abasi. They look really hungry. Suddenly, he and Zac were rocked to the floor. The truck stop them. What happened? said Thomas.

His father pointed at the engine. Steam was coming out of it.

They are waiting to start the engine again. It was getting late in the day. His father tried to start the engine again, but just would not go. They were afraid.





Peter.M. (2001) Jane.W.M.





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BR06: SHIP AHOY!

"time machine"(p.4)


This is story about Georgia and Charlie. They have a time machine inside a tree trunk at the bottom of their garden. They use the time machine, they adventure took them back to the time of the dinosaurs. They were inside the tree, and Georgia pressed a green button.

As soon as the tree start spinning around and around.

When the tree stop spinning, the trunk open. And they step out. They saw crowd standing by some water. They walked over to the crowd.

Where are you from? said a boy. We are from a different time and place said Georgia. Amazing! said the boy. Where are you going? Charlie asked. To America said the boy.

One day, you will thank us, Georgia told the boy.

Never! the boy screamed.





Nicolas.B. (2001) Russell. T.





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